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after seeing nirvana's amazing work i thought to try drawing something too. i was going to draw jenny, in a much less innocent way than marti's portrayal. unsurprisingly, i failed. i messed up the hand by drawing it backwards so there i kind of stopped.



it looks a lot better on paper, but then what doesn't. it's pretty bad, but i hope to improve.
helpful comments please, i'm just starting and need all the help i can get.

SEE NEWER SKETCH LOWER DOWN.

Try to draw a lance and fix the hand...
7.5/10.

It's quite good, even though we havent seen her body entirely, i like it.
i saw something in marti's conversatioin about Jenny using wind abilities and fighting like LouisEX.
Jenny is going to be my next favorite.

Great drawing Yairm210! ^^

the problem is, it's in pen. if i could erase then there would have been a LOT of erasing going on.
i'm using pencil next time.

nice nice. Keep going. 7/10 for an amateur sketch. Advice: You have to have a vision and try to put that on paper as best as you can

not wonderful technical advice, but thanks.
here's the new one! i did a different and in pencil this time:

i didn't know really how to draw her wind-controlling powers so i did the steaks of wind around the arms and the spear. it came out much better this time.
the development was basically:

adapted to my style of drawing (rough draft):

and the current.

nice, im just not digging the face. doesn't look feminine anyways, 7/10

i'm not going to lie..they are pretty bad xD
anyway just keep on it an try to do better

(09-16-2009 12:08 AM)Holymane Wrote: [ -> ]i'm not going to lie..they are pretty bad xD
anyway just keep on it an try to do better

no sherlock. Even yairm acknowledges it

mind your language. - Azriel~

i know that i suck. but how well do you draw, hmm? no one else has submitted any artistic contribution (except for nirvana *worship*) and so i don't have any comparison. so why don't you submit something holymane?